Sunday, January 8, 2012

For your dissection, upon the graced opinion that you might share?

Blue

Azure Sea of stillness

Cornflower dance in autumn golden hue

Turquoise left on a window edge

Sapphirine gaze locked embrace

Cobalt mood that lingers

Under thinning noonday sky

So well I know that colour

Blue

For your dissection, upon the graced opinion that you might share?
I know nothing of the mechanics of writing poetry but your words painted a most beautiful picture behind my eyes. K.L.S.
Reply:Very good very good indeed I enjoyed this poem very much I liked the self-imposed rules and it seems that it really follows your own rules and it seems very structured and yet it seems it doesn't take away from how much life is in this poem.
Reply:I like it! Very sweet, well done.
Reply:Very calming and lovely. I love it!


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